On the 22th of February. the big cool woka.the hole of room six.at the Clive river.
We went Half way down the river.and ternd around. then me and Naomi swopd paddling
In writing we are learning to do Recount.
Something I did well was using ‘w’ details in my opening
Something I need to work on is using order words.
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